Great chords and feel to this track mate. Some sound patches could use a little reworking so they're less abbrasive, like the lead that comes in at .48 secs. It's quite loud and overbearing. It's the right idea though. Also some mixing issues with the dynamics of the track. Seems like it's been highly brickwalled on the master or something. There's lots of focus on the leads and mids, I'd say work on getting the mix right, bring the bass in, take the mids down a lot.
Very nice chords and arrangement though, hopefully some of these comments help. Keep going mate
edit: reading back it sounded harsher than when I was writing it. Please don't think I'm being mean, it's just because I really liked the track and think it has a lot of potential. I never normally write reviews. Good work!